Rabu, 19 September 2018

Offers and suggestion

Hello everyone!
So on 25th July 2018 we work in pairs of 2 and recorded our own dialogues and we have to analye the offers and suggestions and here is the list.

NoNameOffer(s)Suggestion(s)
1Zhafira & Nur23
2Ratna & Tasya22
3Alexa & Imala24
4Avieda & Kinanti24
5Shofi & Alya12
6Sultan & Daffa12
7Amanda, Ananda & Fathan13
8Abyan & Fadhlan12
9Radit & Zhillan11
10Aurelia & Vivaldi11
11Hasya & Aliya11

NoNameOfferSuggestion
1Zhafira & NurMay I help you?How about Bali?
2Ratna & TasyaShall I be the one to call her?Why don't we ask Meghan to come with us too?
3Alexa & ImalaHey, can I hep you?Oh, I know! How about South Korea, what do you think?
4Avieda & KinantiDo you need a company?How about floral? I like floral by the way.
5Shofi & AlyaMay I help you find it?I think you should choose one of them which is suitable to your major.
6Sultan & DaffaShall I buy your ticket?Let's go to England!
7Amanda, Ananda & FathanI can help you with the administration.How about USU?
8Abyan & FadhlanMay I refer you the best college here?I think you should go to the law major.
9Radit & ZhillanDo you want me to help you to go to the moon?I think I will bring you to Mr. Roy
10Aurelia & VivaldiCan I help you choose it?Why don't you go to Raja Ampat?
11Hasya & AliyaDo you want some?... I recommend to go to industrial technology.
That's all thank you.

Senin, 05 Maret 2018

Announcement activity

Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
found
“HELLO GEORGETOWNS”
Contents
found
All of the information of the events
Closing
found
Location and contact information of the shop


ACTIVITY 1








Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
Found
The title is CALL FOR PROPOSAL
Contents
Found
The information about Avian influenza and the information about the researchers recruitment
Closing
found
The detailed information if the readers want to join or requested a proposal














Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
Found
The title of the announcement
Contents
Found
The information of the new address of the store and announce that the old store will be renovated..
Closing
found
The contact numbers and email.

 

Elements of the Announcement
Found/Not Found
Details
Opening
Not found

Contents
found
All of the text included, it’s about opening of the new branches in Indonesia.
Closing
Not found



ACTIVITY 2

NO
TEXT
TRUE/FALSE
1
TEXT A
TRUE
Because the text is announce to the general people so it's for all of the readers 
2
TEXT B
FALSE
Because it's an advertisement text, they pursue the readers to buy the items
3
TEXT C
FALSE
Because it's to invite several people and more private
4
TEXT D
TRUE
Because the announcement is for the public
5
TEXT E
TRUE
Because the announcement is for all of the readers

























ACTIVITY 3

Text
Main Idea
Details
Text 1
Informing the people of Georgetown about the opening of a Suit Shop in a new venue.
-          The announcement came from J.Crew Store
-          The opening will be in April, 2013
-          The shop will offer more of men’s and women’s, weddings and parties collection.
TEXT 2
Informing the people of the recruitment of H5N1 researchers
-information come from WHO organizations
- including H5N1 information
-Rescruitment details
-Contact person if we want to apply the proposal and if we want to ask the further infomation
TEXT 3
Informing the people of the renovation of the old store and the moving out to the new building
-information of the new building address
-information that the old store will be repurpose that is still located in the same address, phone number
-contact information of the store
TEXT 4
Informing the people of the opening of the several branches, the advantages and their hope of their new branches
-The location of the new branches
- the advantages of the new branches
-their hope of the new branches

Sabtu, 20 Januari 2018

Biography of Desmond doss

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   Desmond Doss was born on February 7th 1919 in Lynchburg,Virginia,United States was a United States Army corporal who served as a combat medic with an infantry company in World Wide 2. He was twicw awarded the Bronze Star Medal for actions in Guam and the Philippines. Doss furter distinguished himself in the Battle of Okinawa by saving 75 men, becomming the only conscientious objector to receive the Medal of Honor for his actions during the Second World War who during combat had not killed a single enemy soldier. In fact, he refused to carry a gun. His only weapon were his Bible and his faith in God.
   When he was a child, for example, he once walked 6 miles to donate blood to an accident victim a complete stranger after hearing about the need fot blood on a local radio station. A few days later, Desmond traveled down the same long stretch of road to give more. Instead, Doss spent his childhood doing things like flattening pennies on the railway near his Lynchburg, Virginia home and wrestling with his younger brother, Harold. He said that Desmond wasn't much fun to wrestle with because you could never win not because Desmond was particularly skilled, But because he'd never surrender and didn't know how to give up. From he was a child he always remember that no matter what he shouldn't killed anyone.
   When Pearl Harbour was attacked, he was working at the Newport News Naval shipyard and could requested a deferment but he wanted to do more for his country. He was willing to risk his life on the front times in order to preserve freedom. So he joined army to be a medical soldier. He started to interested in medical because of his 1st wife. They met when Desmond took his friend that injured to the hospital that his wife works at. His wife was a nurse at that hospital. But his decision to joined army is not approved by his father. His father used to be an army too. That's why he is not approved his son decision.
   He wanted to be an Army combat medic. As luck would have it, he was assigned to an infantry rifle company. His refusal to carry a gun caused a lot of trouble among his fellow soldiers. They viewed him with distain and called him a misfit. One man in the barracks warned him, "Doss, as soon as we get into combat, I'll make sure you won't come back alive." His commanding officers also wanted to get rid of the skinny Virginian who spoke with a gentle southern drawl. They saw him as a liability. Nobody believed a soldier without a weapon was worthwhile. They tried to intimidate him, scold him, assign him extra tough duties, and declared him mentally unfit for the Army. Then they attempted to court martial him for refusing a direct order to carry a gun. But they failed to find a way to toss him out, and he refused to leave. He believed his duty was to obey God and serve his country. But it had to be in that order. His unwavering convictions were most important. 
    And at Okinawa in the spring of 1945, Doss' company faced a grueling task: Climb a steep, jagged cliff  sometimes called Hacksaw Ridge to a plateau where thousands of heavily armed Japanese soldiers were waiting for them. The terrain was treacherous. "It was full of caves and holes and the Japanese were dug in underground," says Mel Gibson, who re-created the battle in Hacksaw Ridge. "...The Japanese called it 'the rain of steel' because there was so much iron flying around."Under a barrage of gunfire and explosions, Doss crawled on the ground from wounded soldier to wounded soldier. He dragged severely injured men to the edge of the ridge, tied a rope around their bodies and lowered them down to other medics below. In Benedict's documentary, Doss says: "I was praying the whole time. I just kept praying, 'Lord, please help me get one more.' "
   Veteran Carl Bentley, who was also at Hacksaw Ridge, says in the documentary, "It's as if God had his hand on Doss' shoulder. It's the only explanation I can give. Doss saved 75 men including his captain, Jack Glover  over a 12-hour period. The same soldiers who had shamed him now praised him. "He was one of the bravest persons alive," Glover says in the documentary. "And then to have him end up saving my life was the irony of the whole thing."President Harry Truman awarded Doss the Medal of Honor in 1945. He died in 2006.

QUESTION
1. When did Desmond doss born?
a.7th january 1919
b. 7th february 1919
c. 17th february 1919
d. 17th february 1920

2. Where did Desmond doss born?
a. lynchburg
b. north carolina
c. los angeles
d. london

3. How many people did he save in okinawa's battle?
a. 65
b. 70
c.75
d.55

4. When did he died?
a. 2005
b.2004
c.2003
d.2006

5. What  he wanted to be before he joined army?
a. army combat medic
b. soldier
c. doctor
d. nurse







Jumat, 08 Desember 2017

GATHAPRAYA

     Culture Festival is an annual event of 3 National High School Bandung. This year the Culture Festival is called Gathapraya.Gathapraya means nation's hope for future. Gathapraya held on 30th September 2017. I became committee at Gathapraya event. I became production manager or logistic. All of the committee have prepared  for this event for more than 3 months. 
    For committee we should came at 5 in the morning. So i came a little late at 5.30. When i arrived me and my friends went to backstage and clean it because there are lots of trash. This event had open gate at 12 o'clock, So before it we prepared everything. After open gate there are lots of performance such as MK, hivi,nidji. 
    I do my job to be comitte so i did my best job as i could until the events is ended. At the end of the event, i watched nidji and hivi performance. They performed very well. It's a great experience for me and i hope next year and after i can experience it again.



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